All Comments on 'The Gentlemen's Club Ch. 03'

reflect my opinion of this piece

Keep it up.. cant wait until both girls are there at the same time..

Can you stop using all the innapropriate quotation marks - it is very distracting.

the girls enjoy themselves a lot more.

The story is good and the sex is hot.

But you really need to engage an editor as the numerous typos and errors really detract from the story.

- JT

that shit is hot

What is with all the comments about editing? Someone commented on it, let it go. No wonder you never finished this series. I'm sorry you didn't. I have to say I think I like Fran more. I would have loved to see where you took this from here. Maybe one day you'll come back and finish it.

You and I have had some wonderful cyber scenes together. I must say you have really captured the woman's point of view. I definitely like the power I have as a woman to seduce and tease men. However, there is no way I would have been able to stop at just stroking. I am very oral and I kept wanting the story to move in that direction. Maybe next time you can have the women suck and swallow the first load.

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