All Comments on 'The Quick Retort'

I loved it because that happened to me once

hot story. However, some of the paragraphs were long and tiring to read. There were some punctuation errors too. Keep writing.

Not sure if this is true, but the female character certainly is a mystery. Lends herself to more stories, I think.

Anyway, very good story overall with strikingly erotic, often clever, passages. Your story lacks from tight editing, a few mistakes here and there; nothing a once-over won't fix.

Great job!