by slowhaands
Not sure if this is true, but the female character certainly is a mystery. Lends herself to more stories, I think.
Anyway, very good story overall with strikingly erotic, often clever, passages. Your story lacks from tight editing, a few mistakes here and there; nothing a once-over won't fix.
Great job!
hot story. However, some of the paragraphs were long and tiring to read. There were some punctuation errors too. Keep writing.