All Comments on 'The Toilet Monster Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

This story keeps getting stranger and stranger. You just have to keep coming back for more. Keep up the good work.

Gamergirl10Gamergirl10almost 12 years ago

It's one of those stories you can't un-read. It's good though, humorous & horrific, but it's a car crash you can't tear your eyes from.

I guess I'll keep reading and watch for Ch. 04....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Seriously,

this bad boy should be in the Erotic Horror section because it's so horrifying that I can't stop reading. I was kind of hoping that Eve would explode like Sigourney Weaver did.

DiannahDiannahalmost 12 years ago
Weird and kinky...

...just the way I like it! Please write more!

wet_specialwet_specialover 11 years ago
Use of words

is hilarious. It's too damn funny when your character starts thinking alliteratively about how she is getting fucked by a slime slug.

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.

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