Jim, this is the 2nd time I've read this story, and it's just as good as the first time over a year ago!
BTW, where have you been, buddy? You haven't posted anything new here since February! I can't wait to read what you've got planned for us next!
THE STORY IS WORTH 5 BUT THE ENGLISH ONLY 1
The racism part was a real turn off that I stopped reading.
It was very hard to find the characters attractive after that.
I HVE GIVEN ENJOYMENT TO MANY SWEET SOFT SMOOTH CUTE LITLE YOUNG FRSH VIRGIN TIGHT TINY PUSSIES
WITH RED HEAD LIPS
GOLDEN YELLOW CLITORIS
HONEY FILLED PUSSY HOLES
PUSSIES MAIL firstname.lastname@example.org
Bigotted hack writing!
I have read many father & daughter incest stories and I liked this the best. Somehow or some way I am very attracted to these stories. Not sure, never had any incest or was there in the family. For all the horror stories of incest and abuse I enjoy the love story and actually know three women who stay involved with their daddy's. All of them had children by them or their brothers, kept the babies, move away from "home" and are living like any married couple. I think this is more the reality. I certainly hope so.
Very well-written. But what's the deal with the nightmare about 'foreigners' raping a white woman because 'she's blond(e) and good-looking' and so they're jealous of her. Could you get a little more conceited? Are you a south American? In any case, you Americans are know to be a bunch of idiotic bigots. No brains, only judgements. Dint mean to me that demeaning, but just so that you get to see a reflection of the racist picture that you painted.
What you call sperm (which is short for spermatozoa) constitutes some five percent of semen and is produced in the testicles then carried into the seminal fluid from the prostate gland at ejaculation. Alternatives are spunk,love juice or anything else except sperm. Many Americans make this mistake.(I am English.)
A different point is why in such stories every physical attribute is apparently perfect,whether in appearance or performance.
However,I greatly enjoyed your tale. Thank you.
Yrs, Billydave. (By mistake I have made this public instead of private. Thus the author will probably not read it,for I am too weary to re-write it. )
One of the best I've read yet!!
So hot, very well written, I'm so wet.
Overt racism and pretty mediocre writing.
Still one of my favourites. As erotica I'm not expecting Charlotte Bronte styled writing but the description of the love between Stephanie and her dad was beautiful. Slightly unrealistic, however, that's what makes the fantasy. Also like many other people said the racism was what killed it a bit. Be careful with what you write in the future because you could be offending someone who might even like your writing until they saw that.
Brought me to waves of anticipation.
Loved the story, it was well written although I did have to tolerate the racism at the beginning (try to exclude that from your other stories) nevertheless it was still hot.
Best orgasm ever. But in some parts of the story it was a little boring (in the beginning)
Well written! You could feel the passion you created between father and daughter,
The way you put the emotions into a story makes it worth reading a 1000 times, in fact I've read this one about 50 times and every time it feels anew. You are the best author I've read yet on the whole of the internet. Thanks for writing such masterpieces.
You're stories ... all of them.... It's as though you write what's going through my head. They're so well written...and enthrauling. So real... so filled with Love and Lust. Always with just the right amount of detail. Please continue to write. I will always continue to read.
This story was truly amazing. I really loved it's substance. Awesome
I loved this story and your writing style. Im going to read your other entries now and i will vote on all of them, and if they are as good as this was you will be recieving more 5stars!
Absolutely loved it! I rubbed my pussy through more than half the story and lost count of how many times I came.. Please continue writing more like this... Voted 5 out of 5 stars... Still dripping wet....
Every think of writing storiesand publishing them on the side? Make a bit extra money with stories like this.. id buy if this one was in a book :)
U have done an incredible job by writing this story.I'm reading this story for the 5th time.The last paragraphs, particularly "Present-2006", have once again brought tears to my eyes.I can't believe an erotic story moved me.Pls try to come up with a book.Like about Stephanie's childhood, how she started k getting attracted to her dad & most importantly about their life after marriage.That would be delightful to read u know.If books like Fifty Shades Of Grey can be best-sellers, so can a book based on your story.If possible pls be kind enough to come up with a second part.That would be awesome. :-)
Hey bigot? You should get a 0 score to match your mentality. The 'hated it!' score of 1 will just have to be a reflection for you and have to do. How bout you and that RCummings creature die alone and in pain.?)..just kidding..
Story was easy to read and a becoming love story. Enjoyed reading it.
Absolutely a wonderful love story.
It seems there is more and more validation to the studies of family love.
very well written. you have a talent.
I truly enjoyed reading this story and I'm glad you and your daddy have children together and are happily married. What a great love story. Wish it was me.
wow, this was amazing
but seriously, racist
I have many Arab friends and they were actually very sexy
As for racism--America is the least raceist country in the world. But then it also had the best healthcare in the world until power hungrey socialists got control of the democratic party and use both for achieving more power and control over fools that listen to them spin-lie about everything!
Right up front I want to briefly made a comment that several minutes ago never entered my mind, consciously nor unconsciously! RACISM? Just exactly what is it? As long as it's NOT a white person, a caucasian, that makes or utters any comment, sordid, nasty, biased, remarks of any type or persuasion, that person and their comments are overlooked and ignored and are never considered racist. IT IS ONLY when a white, caucasian makes an exact same comment, exact same wording, does it becoma a racist remark. PEOPLE!!! Get over it? it is only racist IN THE EYES OF THE BEHOLDER!!!!! The object, the target of the spewer, the projector of the words or remarks are not in most cases the reacist.
The author/writer of this story is to be commended, applauded, and congratulated to the utmost degree for his/her penmanship and knowledge and love and compassion for compiling this EPIC--though not in length but words--saga of pure, innocent, compassionate and everlasting love and devotion. There are almost 200,000 words in Webster's (1976 version) Dictionary, and none of them could have better been selected nor used to build this story any better than the words chosen by this author. It is a grandslam, perfectly pitched shutout baseball World Series game winning the Championship ten to zero with a world television audience of ten billion, an over capacity-filled stadium played in their home park. It just fantfuckingtastically doesn't get any more PERFECT than that!!!!!
Lastly, being a purist and perfectionist, the ratings I offer have to be deserved, not passed out to be nice, but in my opinion, objectively. Rarely, very rarely do I give the top rating for an incest story unless, after the consummation of the incestual love, the female character is impregnated, bred, made with child, blessed with procreation, propagation, or some similiar connotation. There are a few instances, where the female is unable to conceive--age, disability, or physically, or medically--and in that case the story must be worthy of excellent and almost perfect in every aspect, then I will honor the story (and author) their just reward. This story not only got my rare and blessed "5 Star" rating, but congratulations beyond my wildest imagination for a story so well conceived, written and constructed. JOB WELL DONE!! In fact, this story is so good and so real, it is a shame it is not real, non-fiction!
good storyline that led up to the ending. Very hot and well-written. Keep writing more stories!
Oooh how I wish I was the girl in the story.As I read it all I can think about is how much I want to be with my uncle.Each day I plan to get him,I have a Ipod which I put some porn videos and pics on just to show.So he get turn on and want to fuck me again as he used when I was a small child.He feel I don't remember.
I'd find this story really hot if it weren't for the racism...totally turned me off. Not cool.
the arab comment WAS racist and the whole 'jealous of our freedom' bs was really fking not on. Also, its racist because of stereotypical comments of beard etc It completely stopped me working my clit like wtf dude at least offer a fking apology at the start or a warning so i wouldnt have wasted my time and got completely turned off.
Fantastic story, thank you
Good buildup, sexy throughout and excellent finish!
it's porn, ya pc doodles. and pretty good at that. i suppose it would have been ok had the bad guys been blue eyed blond haired germans. guess somebody would have staged a drive-by had they been black. how about some tolerance for the artist? i would like to see a novel, or at least a novella sprout out of it. maybe next time?
To those people that have to pop in and leave a comment about you being offended by racism, screw off. If you don't like it leave. Don't stop and comment, whining about your displeasure, just back up your browser and move on. Stop being attention whores and grow a set. Name's Jerry btw. Pussies.
Although i am not into incest what a hot story. I love how it ends you get to see a happy ending with two people who love each other.
x Winkwinkjojo x
i stuffed up clicked wrong star , no it was a good read nicely ended
Absolutly loved it.
I loved it! I want more.
This is so so hot...i love it...kissses to Daddy....
OMG I loved it...need more good stories
as I read this delightful tale whilst sipping my morning tea on the terrace. Thank you for a perky start to my day!
This story made me cum twice. Fucking sexy. Wish my dad would do that. I have such a throbbing pussy now
Thanks for sharing. It was hot, steamy, without being vulgar. Not to endorse such behavior but the writing/storytelling is excellent. It made a repellant reality into a hot fantasy.
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