Non-Erotic Poetry Comments

I love this

mignonne

Very evocative of Leonard Cohen's own chaotic and (for him) eventually disappointing love life. Love it!

Six lines of utter devotion. Perfect.

very atmospheric = builds well

Short and sweet. Essayed the emotions well.

Rings true, strong feeling and time will drive one to action. Thanks for sharing!

Really romantic & beautiful.

Amazing & provocative. I love this.

You gave my material a chance so I thought I'd return the favor! Turns out this was exceptionally deep and well written. Loving others does indeed require loving ourselves,or at least loving pieces of ourselves. It's a struggle to achieve that but worth it!

This is incredible.

So beautiful.

Eloquent & well written. I love this.

Well written. I love Leonard Cohen.

Thank you so much, Wag xxxxx

You write beautifully, thank you for sharing part of yourself with us.

Your personification of Nature is sensuous and intimate.

Well done!

Sweet.

Moving on, Growing up.

What doth youth know of depth beyond a mirrors 1D lie?

Last night, she held the broomsword, while her corpulent knight tried to budge the fridge.

Two shriekers as the four inch dragon raced, all too successfuly, for its cave of safety below the cabinets....

Sweet, romantic & beautiful.

I love poems like this that make me think. Well written. Really deep & profound.

Incredibly tranquil & beautiful.

Reminds me of the way things are right now. Dark.

Really incredible. I love this.

This made me hurt & cry.

Reminds me of too many memories I'm trying to forget.

Sad. You made my eyes begin to water.

xoxo

Beautiful

Good!

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its lovely

You have a nice feel for meter and rhyme.

Beats me. I'm glad I don't live next to one of those things.

Have you ever seen the movie, "The Quiet Earth"? It's an obscure apocalyptic Australian piece. You might like it. Thought provoking.

I think sometimes the living do see the dead. I like the poem, though.

Thank you dear Meli’…

Sometimes you just have to look around😊

Very well done. The phrasing actually reminds me of some of the more well-known Ancient Egyptian poetry, with a nice, modern edge. This is probably the best you have done on this site. Keep up the good work!

Omg you are incredibly smart aren’t you… wow

Kellie 💜❤️🩷