Erotic Poetry Comments

Indeed!

Very vulnerable girly lover: love it!!!

You have a way with words.

Hot, beautiful, and awe-inspiring. xoxo

SPROING haha Very Original! And I see Pixiehoff, herself wrote you a poem… 5 stars and silver linnings.

Hi M, why thank you!

Thanks Jeanne. xxx

There were a couple of passages I thought were good and the rest about 70% okay. I was going to spend longer on it but thought it would make a good starting point if I wanted to do more.

quite the epic ode = liked

beautiful scansion - smiles sweetly

Agreeing with Frodov here, this was really well done!

Sad but beautifully delivered. xoxo

A Kraken is a mythical creature; cud be a Giant Squid which may grow to 50 meters!!! The first verse , inter alia, states the Kraken has been released....Mythologically young maidens were sacrificed at the altar of Lust of this Sea Monster....thank you for the daring imagery....

This man is a fool

when he could drool

over your delicious pussy

he goes off to prove he's a wussy.

It's such a shame, he doesn't want to play,

With the curves that nature, so graciously lay.

The softness of skin, the warmth of embrace,

A treasure chest, a divine, sacred space.

I would drop everything, to spend some time,

With the one who ignites, a fire so divine.

To taste the...

So deep, So honest... So crisp. "And like a benign thief, You mercifully took everything I needed to give". Wish you well.

Free choice, so they say, is our right,

But I confess that, try as I might

To reject sexy Mél

Is as stupid as hell

That bloke really is not very bright.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Age is a mere number

As Méli knows so well

Her Daddy's so much older,

But she thinks "What the hell?

I've had young boys before now

They don't compare at all.

And now Daddy's fucking my bum hole

His cock's so hard and thick

The sting as he thrusts is exquisite,

I'll be squirting my...

DK loves her Daddy's cock,

A one eyed monster play stick

It makes her cum in copious waves

It's long, it's hard, it's thick.

He slides it into her dripping cave

She loves how it feels so tight

Daddy's cock gives her orgasms wave after wave

And she squirts with all her might.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟...

Poignantly erotic; speaks volumes. Thought provoking verse. Yes, the cuckoldry of many of your other poems, but this one gives pause; so much feeling: “Our naked bodies embraced, caressed by the neon lights from outside world.” Even can wonder whose love killed; who won’t forgive;...

Poem captures the humiliation of modern cuckoldry but also her patronizing attitude. Blunt. Excellent verse.

Almost limerick like; not particularly erotic.

Captured slut perfectly.

Liked the last line and the humor embedded in this short poem.

Like very much what shared here — the age and experience difference; the sensitivity. Could feel it.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Nice tempo.

I can feel the rhythmic pulse.

“Her skin glows rosy, flushed with exertion,

Hair matted and wild from thrashing contortions”

..my favorite part.

A wonderful debut. Brava, Tracey...xxxxxx Jeanne

Sad but sweet.

she sings for all of us

AMEN!

Hey Anon, you probably shoulda went with the clothes pin, idiot.

I like how you say “my love” and “my dear.”

Thank you AjayTamil. I started the poem because I was feeling my woman would think like this about me on a lonely night. Nights are becoming more lonely too frequently. But then I realised if I made it gender neutral, it might be a good read for others too.

bad boy - watching me and my pinkies again!

Nice. I cannot say if it is a man or woman calling out to touch. It is gender neutral and can fit any partner of any orientation.

Thank you for the kind words, everyone.

Our 69-word arrangement was fun.

Two stanzas of six lines became sublime,

Like “turning” my weakness slowly into a nine.