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I can feel your pain in this. I've lost family because of thier Bipolar.

Mouthwatering and thirst-quenching. Five stars.

Delicious

Great balance of mind, body, soul and time. *****

Your poem felt so good my mind detached from reality. Five stars.

Smooth and clean. Five stars.

Bold and real. I love it.

I really love this poem. I think it is your best one, despite the fact that some of your others have a higher rating. The way the second part of a stanza subverts the first part is really so well done.

I know these feelings all too well. Well written.

That's a beautiful poem to write for your birthday. Happy Birthday.

Hmmm….I’m a quixotic old man now! The truth is my dear…you’re always in control. Us old men are easily led!

Very nice piece Paul! The looking into ones self is something that I’m identifying with more and more as of late. Beautiful.

Wow! This could be a song! Love the imagery of this. Great work Satyr61.

Of stars I give you five, but man alive! Your claim that belief in heaven requires acceptance of hell is totally spurious and even injurious to a soul who wants to survive! The concept leads me to mirth. The theory that hell is where the devil's in charge is defeated by understanding...

A HARD Summer Night

a "five spot" for sure ! ... as always !!

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oh ... check out my just posted story ... A Hot Hummer Night

... take care, stay safe levi coldwater

Very nice Tasha x

Good work. Love the imagery. I’ll second the mention of Cat Stevens!

Whose darkness is really satisfied? Clear you love erotic poetry — this piece a perfect example. Tempted to say I enjoy your poetry more than your prose, but will not do so. Continue to share both.

really nice ...

... we will be expecting more !

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take care, stay safe levi coldwater

The male of the species leaves Méli baffled

They go to a strip club and leer

At this beautiful woman, who, whilst taking off her clothes

Is wondering "Is that old bloke queer?"

He sits in his seat and plays with his cock

Whilst ogling and breathing quite fast

At the sight of her tits...

Erotic

I’m in the mood for this.

I love it.

Thank you, Katie xxxxx

Gorgeous, Pixie. So moving x

Considering that the writer is a female, this poem is a bit nostalgic. How time had changed. Soldiering which once was a noble profession is now being looked upon with curious prism of antagonism. As the poem wants to imply, America is fighting wars to give Amerizans peace and freedom....

The youngs always compliment the old. The freshness and rhe rawness against the backdrop of wisdom and experience. The young to savor the mighty seed; the old to feel that his youth has come back to life.

A tryst beiween the old and young is the splendor of lire/

A warm blend of romance and sex

precious and caring - I love it

Cute but you may need to study evolution and stop believing the Flintstones are right

well played

Very nice ode - smiles

I saw your post on the forums and came to check your stuff out. 5* for this poem!

Nice touch! I think the last time I wrote a poem was in 1979 when my first daughter was born! Thanks. 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐'s