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Good story but most of the story jumped all over the place making it a lil hard to keep up. Should've been categorize under novels and probably broken up into chapters instead.

It made me hot and horny. For cock. Warm hard dick in my mouth to suck on. Swollen long masculine dick fucking my tight gripping ass. A man cuming in both my holes, all the time. My boyfriend.

Wow, what a great story... I hope you continue it and we can read what will happen in the week and the visit that Mallory booked for next month with her friends.

“Honey, I wanted to feel you when we reached Paris. I was done with Dad. You are caring, funny, extremely handsome, and make me feel good. I want you. All of you! I do not care about moral issues. I gave your father the best years of my life and got nothing in return. I wish to start...

Excellent story as I always expect from you. One question, wouldn't the DNA been similar being father and son?

Well that one hit a sore spot with a lot of the commenters. Basically, she fucked up, finally came to realize, and did whatever she had to do to set it right. People aren't perfect, and sometimes you just need things to be left as a dramatic lesson. A good marriage can get past that.

A well written story but lacked the same feeling at the first chapter. This last part seemed to be rushed and I noted several typos or spelling errors near the end. Something I never noticed in the preceding chapters. I'm certainly not one of the gramier police and just found it odd...

Fantastic!! I wish I had been a part of a family like this. Before the end of this story I was wondering, rather hoping that the mother was not on birth control and ended up pregnant.

I repeat an earlier comment: I really liked the focus on Jenna’s big tits as an erogenous zone of lust by both Jerome and Cindy. Clearly Jenna found their attention very arousing as well.

Too long of a story.

I have been playing golf for over 60 years. Had a in- one only once. In am at best, a bogey golfer , And yet I love the game and continue to play it for all the reasons you set out. Thanks!

Enjoyed the story, put a smile on my face. Thanks for your writing.

Nice story but moving too slowly.

Back again with a rereading. Lucky Jerome! Two very hot and sexy women who cannot get enough of his cock and want their threesome arrangement to proceed. They are going to wear out his cock for sure. Terrific story. One small criticism: the dialogue seems just a bit stilted to me...

Anonymous, Lynn is definitely the character most in need of a hard spanking and humility/humiliation. It's not impossible, but it likely won't happen soon outside of a character's imagination. We'll have to see. I'm glad you love the story, though! Thank you for the kind words!

This right here, is what I was referring to in comments on chapter two. @kiwihunter, a reader who most likely hails from New Zealand, could or would typically be a resource or a subject matter expert. Maybe he was reading the story as he was nodding off, maybe he was six deep into...

This hot story brought back memories of my youth growing up in a large family like this that also got together for holidays and vacations. Relatives would frequently share rooms and occasionally even beds. Although certainly not commonplace, I do remember experimenting a few times...

Enjoyed this, will certainly read part 2

"KREMKOVA"-four months ago...you really should keep your opinions to yourself...because you have NO TASTE, OR DISCERNMENT...

This is a magnificent storyline and I am so looking forward to the 2nd chapter!! Yyyaaayyy!!!!!

Five**5**Stars!!

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☹ It Needs A Little More Work,,, Yes!

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Hallo Dolly2!

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The biggest mistake I have seen so far is that Principle Hudsons did, was in taking them to her own home... how fucking stupid!! Unless Vera and Beatrice were planning to kill both Joyce and Tina then dispose of...

One additional comment. This also points to the excessive importance given to sex by our society. It has surely been a crock of shit in my life.

This happens to perfectionists. There was a doctor in our town with a beautiful wife and two young boys.He apparently made some kind of medical mistake and offed himself. Same with a young clergyman and a couple of professors I knew slightly.

Thank-You, 5-More Stars and 5-Orgasms! 🌹

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Hallo Dolly2!

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Yes it's still kind of short!

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From your two new kinky dyke friends.

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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Shallow women…

I appreciate your sense of humour.

Not fair. I keep waiting for his thing to crater, and it's GREAT! JUST FUCKIN' GREAT!! 5 stars; on to part three. Please don't disappoint me

.The BEAR

Very erotic tale. I do like that Jenna’s big tits attracted Jerome’s attention more than just from their initial introduction. Too often big tits seem like clickbait and nothing is heard about them after the first page. Looking forward to the next chapter.

@dirtyoldbiman - You are very kind. I did enjoy writing it.

Sweet

Rough, mean, and disturbingly arousing. Well done.

An excellent exporation of the switch dynamic. The added dimension of having her mster present makes this potent and highly charged D/s erotica..

Nice story but double ditto about the spelling and grammar errors. Made it hard to follow.

As always...love your writing style.

My Queen 👩🏿 and I 👩🏼‍ are giving you 5-Stars With Our Thanks!

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Hallo Dolly2!

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Yeah it's short!

Doesn't it seem as if everyone is a critic, I just wonder how many of them could do better, or is it possible there all just like me, unable to write a story even if...

Lucky guy.