by Cybergirlz
Really good addition! Didn’t expect the purchases so soon—I guess it has been a while, huh? The writing up to Jenny’s climax was solid, and Joe’s attack on AlphaTwo was shocking. The beginning of this entry was certainly very depressing. What an awful world they live in! Anyways, can’t wait for the next entry!
thanks for the feedback always appreciated. Next chapter we get to meet Rockwood for real and was a joy to write. The next couple of chapters have a lot more plot/action and am keen to see how they go down.