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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Normally I'm not a big fan of random flashes like this in a story. I find it being disjointed too hard to keep up with. But while your story did have a bit of that, somehow you made it work tremendously. I would love to see you follow up with what happens when these people get home and the pheremones wear off. Do they feel guilty? Shy? Embarrased? Empowered? Mischievous? Wanna do it all again, and then some? Just something I hope you'll consider. 5/5 well deserved stars.

Dewey Cheatham

bottovarnisbottovarnis9 months ago

terrific story! Great tease and quite erotic in scope. Pacing was a little quick but I enjoy lots of people going at it at once. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very disjointed and hard to read.

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