by AlexFourways
Wow thanks for all the Views, Ratings and Favourites! 2k+ in ten hours is a pleasant shock!
Any and all feedback on what I got right (or wrong) will benfit future stories!
Alex
I’m loved this story, especially when the gangbang is orchestrated by a woman who loves sex. I used to believed multi orgasmic and continuously orgasming women were fantasy, but I’ve found one that is both. It’s great to have stories that encourage both fantasy and my reality. Sequel please.
Anecdoteskeptic, thanks for the comments. Clearly a lot of people are reading this one and voting, so I must have got someting right.
Sequel. It's part of the premise of these One-Off tales that they don't continue, which I why I added a 'For those who like closure'.
My other, multi-part stories, either were intended as such, but even then the characters have taken the story off in their own direction that I wasn't planning!
Much Ado About Mr Fourways was supposed to be: The missed date, the wrong person, and then Alex and Bella going to Carol's and continuing the Gang Bang. But Dan had other ideas and Alex and Bella spent the night together, as did Dan and Carol. I have another two 1x: stories in the works but possibly an idea / situation might float your boat.
I like this respectful story. The guy who showed no respect got excluded and that is why everybody else gained the freedom to have sex and fun.
I doubt that the last Anon will be back to read this, but as Terry Pratchett said, 'when you start writing the characters take over and do their own thing.' When I wrote "The dark haired Rob, always a bit crude, but also good looking" I had him lined up to be the leader in the escapade, but he blew it with his 'sun doesn't ...' and 'gang bang' attitude and had to be shown the door. I had meant Opal to have them one at a time, (at least initially) but then she decided to have more fun than that.
A good story real nasty and erotic with plenty of nasty raw fucking and swallowing loads of seed.
God I love a story like this written from a females viewpoint. Your description of virgin males was spot on. Well done!