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"Simon! What are you doing here!" Brittany called out from down the hall. All Simon did was point to the four empty beds of his children. "Come on silly, they're waiting on you," she giggled pulling him down the hall.
Entering the room where his mother, sister and aunt rested after hours of labor. The crowd parted as they entered the room. There in the arms of their mother's were the next generation of Winters. Out of the corner of his eye he caught the slight movement of that shadow, as it approached their beds. Simon's lip trembled as the shadow solidified into Judy's ghostly form.
"Hallelujah!" everyone sang causing a tear to roll down Simon's cheek.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 month agoYou had a well-told and steamy story going until about halfway through this final chapter, when you decided out of the blue to abandon the steamy incest theme for a transgender one. I'm not dissing that genre by any means, but when you did this you introduced last-minute characters and subplots that felt forced and uninspired, detracting greatly from the main plot and wonderfully developed characters that I had become so invested in over the course of several chapters. As a result, what could have been a knockout finale to an otherwise spectacular series instead was rushed, unsatisfying, and disappointing.
Anonymous2 months agoUgh...... Wow... to be so popular and wanted by so many women. A veritable cornucopia of bjs and barebacked pussy. Then throw in mansions and $150M! All told in a well told, but utterly depraved tale. I can truthfully say I have never read the like here. The author is clearly a talented writer.
