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"Simon! What are you doing here!" Brittany called out from down the hall. All Simon did was point to the four empty beds of his children. "Come on silly, they're waiting on you," she giggled pulling him down the hall.
Entering the room where his mother, sister and aunt rested after hours of labor. The crowd parted as they entered the room. There in the arms of their mother's were the next generation of Winters. Out of the corner of his eye he caught the slight movement of that shadow, as it approached their beds. Simon's lip trembled as the shadow solidified into Judy's ghostly form.
"Hallelujah!" everyone sang causing a tear to roll down Simon's cheek.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 months agoYou had a well-told and steamy story going until about halfway through this final chapter, when you decided out of the blue to abandon the steamy incest theme for a transgender one. I'm not dissing that genre by any means, but when you did this you introduced last-minute characters and subplots that felt forced and uninspired, detracting greatly from the main plot and wonderfully developed characters that I had become so invested in over the course of several chapters. As a result, what could have been a knockout finale to an otherwise spectacular series instead was rushed, unsatisfying, and disappointing.
Anonymous3 months agoUgh...... Wow... to be so popular and wanted by so many women. A veritable cornucopia of bjs and barebacked pussy. Then throw in mansions and $150M! All told in a well told, but utterly depraved tale. I can truthfully say I have never read the like here. The author is clearly a talented writer.
hindsight20203 months agoI was with you until you said there was a "competing brand" to WD-40.
WHAT!?!?
Just kidding.
I will go back and finish reading.
But.... Really???
Anonymous6 months agoVery enjoyable. Would have wished for the Simon/Amy love to be explored, just 'cause I like the happily ever after stuff. But good read. Thanks for sharing
Gadf776 months agoThis story is quite the roller-coaster. I went from sharing his anger at the beginning to getting turned on to feeling sad when reading about the MC sings along with his grandmother while wathing her video. Weird but wonderful too.
Anonymous8 months agoI think the writer was a bit immature, but Simon should have at the beginning after he found out what was going on, instead of wasting time in his room, I liked the camera idea where he set them up to catch them in the act formally and then used it to solidify using the internet and selling enough of the sex and fucking going on to get some much needed cash to finally get himself out of town right after graduation. The fact that he did accuse his mom of rape on boxing day, and she lost her temper and threw him out of the house, so he packed up and left and went his grandmother's to stay. Simon then setup his old laptop with and alarm before he left and joined the army and after Amy hit a key the whole show was played for them as well as Paul and Melody messages to each other caused Pamela to divorce Paul. Simon was now gone for 6 yrs. Until he got word that his Grandmother passed away and he inherits all her holdings, which put a monkey wrench into the rest of the family, it kind of pissed them off. When he came back to see the Lawyer and had watched Judy's will was probably shocked to see that he inherited all her holdings including the house with some stipulations. He got the last laugh.
Anonymous8 months agoRobert and Paul sampled all the goods and gave the leftovers to Simon. It's like buying a worn out second hand car.
