All Comments on 'A Good Lesson'

Excellent conceit, and fun to read. It makes me wish you'd fleshed it out a little more. A little more exchange at the start, and some inkling of the husband's reaction would have been awesome. Thanks.

Premise with possibities.

But rushed.

Lacks meaningful sexual buildup. Lacks tension.

She doesn't ask him if he finds her attractive. Or notices his hardon before anything starts.

Three stars.