All Comments on 'A Little Chistmas Magic'

by PaulaApril

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stockingnutstockingnut5 months ago

Wow! That was hot!

Jlyn1Jlyn15 months ago

I loved the twist at the end. Incredible story of a love rekindled.

AmbulAmbul5 months ago

I liked it. What a romantic and sexy fantasy.

madtowncunilinguistmadtowncunilinguist5 months ago

Very nice story of Christmas magic. a few typos here and there, but nothing too major. In a few places the husband's name is spelled Brain instead of Brian. I saw one other misspelling, but can't find it now. again - great story!

MaydaypilotMaydaypilot5 months ago

Brilliantly erotic 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

NEthingGozeNEthingGoze4 months ago

Wow! Your power continue to grow. So much fun and then the marvelous twist that finished the tale so perfectly. Capraesque Christmas delight, a classic. I do adore your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I loved the culinary misspellings!

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Amateur author of erotica. My stories are sometimes an outlet for my deviant or bi-curious thoughts that I'm too nervous to try in real life. May be one day. Some collections and longer works are available on Amazon Kindle for anyone who wants to add my work to their library.