All Comments on 'A Love Story Pt. 02'

I have read the first two installments of this story. I still see no romance in this story. Not much in character development or story line other than he fucks her. May I suggest that if you want to get and keep your readers interest, get into your characters more. Show they have a connection and not just a hookup. Write on how they react to one another and explore each other. The sex will come, but the reader will wait for the build up and enjoy the trip there. That is my 2 cents. Thanks for your efforts and imagination.

Thank you, Mr. Anonymous. I think with part three they have reacted to each other and show their love to each other. Again thank you

This is a good romance story, with tender love, and in this chapter there is a better introduction and character development than in the first chapter. However, the story would be better if there were more of both. As for the love scene, it is well written, but, like other aspects of the chapter, is rather too brief.