All Comments on 'A Moveable Feast Pt. 04'

While it was a cute and somewhat strangely silly story, the way you came up with the ending was impressive. I was wondering if her cramping or monthly cycle would play a part and I thought at first that the feeling she was having was some blood flowing down her back which would be rather difficult to explain away as someone would undoubtedly see something. Whether this is the end of the story or not, you came up with a brilliant ending to this chapter.

Glad that you enjoyed it! I was indeed originally planning to stop here, but ended up having a few more ideas that have taken things a little farther.