All Comments on 'A Night at the Theater'

Loved this! One of the best stories I have read recently

One of the best stories I have read on here in a long time.

Thanks for the positive feedback, anonymous people. I appreciate the comments and I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

I love that its a shorter story that still manages to be really arousing with a great build up. I liked the teasing on a date and the bit of boundary pushing. Maybe the exhibitionism would be hotter if the lights werent so bright and she could see the audience more? Would it have been too much for her?

Loved this! The use of second person POV really immersed me in the fantasy in an unexpected way. I may be projecting my own experience here, but the only thing I could say would add to the exhibition theme & end the story on a bang, would be if they didn't wait till they got home and they gave in to their urges on the hood of the car, or bent over the trunk, where anyone could see.