All Comments on 'A Prehistoric Mating'

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dasgoodshitdasgoodshit9 months agoAuthor

This was a 750 word challenge. I don't know why "(750 words)" was removed from the title, nor why some of my tags weren't included. Sorry if you read a 750 word challenge and didn't want to!

rjr_1954rjr_19549 months ago

This short definitely deserves a longer version and a sequel. It was well written and suspenseful. I look forward to a continuation of this story!

MediocreAuthorMediocreAuthor9 months ago

This deserves a higher score, and also a longer version. As I feel that I had at least some hand in the formulation of this idea, I'll write the longer version if you don't! :heart:

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Short, Intense, Great.

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