by dasgoodshit
This was a 750 word challenge. I don't know why "(750 words)" was removed from the title, nor why some of my tags weren't included. Sorry if you read a 750 word challenge and didn't want to!
This short definitely deserves a longer version and a sequel. It was well written and suspenseful. I look forward to a continuation of this story!
This deserves a higher score, and also a longer version. As I feel that I had at least some hand in the formulation of this idea, I'll write the longer version if you don't! :heart: