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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

You really need to learn how to quote dialog. I didn't notice a single quotation mark in that entire story, despite there being plenty of lines of dialog in it.

bonbombonbom5 months agoAuthor

thank you for your feed back. I am not quite sure what you mean, can you help me with an example please

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My mind goes wild sometimes and I couldn't do anything about it. Until I found this place where I can write about it and let my imagination run free.

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