All Comments on 'A Simple Change'

great story! I like your style. Simple sexy fun here. Looking forward to checking out your other stories

Wonderful story. I really liked your style too. You have a lot of time/space to this world. It was easy to imagine walking through campus with time passing between classes. Can’t wait for more.

This is a very interesting plot for a free use tag, so much in fact I can't fap on it. You did very amazing job on putting free use in logic and even romantic, so that it'd changed to became less lusty and more refined. Not the one I'm looking for the tag, but definitely a great and unique read. Thank you and great honor from Jakarta 🙏

Great story, what made it so interesting was how you fleshed out the dynamics and relationships of each characters. It's uncommon to see authors write about already established relationships about so many characters and then change the dynamic by adding in freeuse.

Your focus on Lana was especially amazing due to her friendship with the main character. It definitely felt like a real friendship made even better with his wish. I'm curious to see if you'll continue this story since the other characters and relationship dynamics haven't been as fleshed out yet. But there's definitely a lot of potential in this world you've built.

It is a very interesting story and I really liked it. The romantic plot with Heather was perfect. Would love to see their study sessions in future chapters, if you choose to write them.