All Comments on 'A Simple Trade Pt. 01'

Very nicely done. It is always nice to welcome a new writer into the fold. You showed almost flawless word-level execution showing that you know how to slow-proof and not just rely on some computer spell-checker. But, I would hope that you will turn your next tale away from sex with her man and on to some fun with her landlord, her boss, or the pushy neighbor down the block. Lit is all about 'improper' hookups, you know!

great story. No need to add another man as the first comment says. Plenty of opportunity for this husband and wife to develop their intense sex life together in many ways that will peak the reader's interest.

Continued?……I hope so. Very erotic story