by barcomber
A well written, but predictable, story. If it had stuck to the core plot of a couple engaged in swinging for the first time, it would have been a good read. However, I like erotica to be believable and plausible. When the swingers went to a mill pond from their home town where they met a woman swimming, then immediately engaged her in a threesome which included anal sex, I felt that the story had been completely derailed. In addition, I am not keen on gratuitous buggery in the middle of a 'loving wives' story (isn't there a category in Literotica called 'Anal?). What is wrong with good old fashioned fucking? Anyway, I am sure that there are plenty of Anal fans out there who will lap this up, but I am not one of them. Also, this series is missing a 'MacGuffin', or overarching story, linking the episodes and characters together. I may read Chapter 4 if there is no sodomy. 3 stars.