A Tempting Vacation Ch. 08

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Ron, his mouth now parched, was unable to respond other than to utter a tiny groan and to thrust his hips upward slightly, offering himself completely to Beth’s hand.

Satisfied that she had completely reeled Ron in, Beth removed her hand as if Ron’s pants were on fire, and said “I just have to tell myself that you, and your cock are off limits. It is just plain wrong. I am so sorry Ron, I got carried away again. It is the combination of the alcohol, our conversation, and remembering the way your lovely prick looked and felt just a few hours ago. Please forgive me.”

Before Ron could even attempt to answer, Beth said, “Oh look, here comes Amy and her mom. Let’s just forget about this little setback, okay? I promise you can trust me from now on out. It’s Pam you should be paying attention to.”

Beth was most satisfied with her ability to completely mind-fuck Ron, even though she was making herself crazy at the same time. She was fairly certain that she’d be able to manipulate him into some deliciously tempting situations in Amy’s absence over the coming days.

Ron, as had been the case for most of the trip, was surrounded by the three sexy ladies with his steel hard cock throbbing, barely concealed beneath the thin material of his pants. As Amy pulled his from his seat, and to the dance floor, he wondered how he’d be able to withstand the temptation of being alone with Pam and Beth while Amy was away.

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yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 2 years ago

Really impressive how you keep edging the story forward. (Pun intended) And how you keep it all straight and easy to follow.

The occasional typo and spelling goofs are easily forgiven and quickly forgotten.

Can't wait to see what happens when Amy leaves ;->

schoolmrsschoolmrsalmost 8 years ago
slow burn

As an older and lustful woman I am impressed by the insight and repression your story continues to exhibit. I have been in the position of Pam on more than one occasion, and understand her temptation and stubborn resistance to sample the obvious talents of a familiar but shy younger man. In my case a co-worker and a neighbour's son were the best two. Keep the story going, the slow burn style generates enormous heat and moisture, I can vouch for that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Edge of my seat

Great stories... I wish the next chapter would arrive though! Come on Jack put us out of our misery. Anything would be good!!!

Vampiric_MirageVampiric_Mirageabout 20 years ago
Mmmm...

Excellent as always. Each chapter seems to exceed the one before it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
*CAUTION*:extremly waky + insane scenerio included

hey jack i've got an idea for a really wacky scenerio for ron and company, but it's just so insane that i'm not sure if the mass audience will be able to handle it, or you, for that matter, if you're not prone to extremely insane and wacky scenarios. if so, discontinue reading at this point. ok, so i guess you kept reading. good. now how about this for the next installment of your story: ron... ejaculates! yes, i know it's crazy, but i thought maybe you should throw in some...sex(?) in the next chapter just to switch things up from chapter 8 where no one actually got any sexing at all. if i didn't know better, i'd say you were some kind of tease or something. you've created a monster here, jack, and now you've got to feed it. remember the old chinese prover: "he who makes me really horny with his wacky stories had sure as shit better at least include some sexin in the next chapter".

JackKingJackKingabout 20 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the compliments

I appreciate the feedback on my efforts.

I sent in chapter 9 today. It should post sometime next week.

Chapters 8 and 9 represent all I have written to date. As much as I'd like to crank out chapter 10 in a few days, realistically, it isn't going to happen. I'll work on it as I can.

I think I know where I am headed, but if any of you would like to offer some juicy scenarios for Ron and his friends, I always appreciate something clever.

Thanks for your patience as I write the next chapter.

Jack

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
At Last

Awelcome return, I've been waiting for chapter 8 for what seems like forever, but it was definately worth it!! Keep up the good work, but please don't make us wait too long!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Where will it go from here...?

Can't wait to see where Jack takes the story next! Wherever it does go I am sure it will be superb.

Is it wrong to ask when the next chapter is planned for????

It's the not knowing which is killing me!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Well worth the wait!

Thanks Jack - hope we don't have to wait as long for the next installment! But you're the man - so do it at your own pace! The introduction of Courtney & Shannon leave many possibilities - but in the end I assume you know that we want to see Ron fuck Pam and Beth and Amy at the same time. Maybe you need to introduce another male character to take some of the pressure off Ron? I'll volunteer!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Ring A Ding Ding!

What a wonderful return! Thankyou Jack. I imagined a lot of things about future episodes but did not expect to see Courtney & Shannon again. Keep 'em coming - it's great writing and very suspenseful.

Don't y'all think this would make a breakthrough masterpiece of an adult movie?

Pure genius!

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