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by KnutG

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good start

Good start. A little more proof-reading is in order as grammar mistakes can be distracting.

andtheendandtheendalmost 14 years ago
Congratulations

Your story was chosen for highlighting in the Story Feedback section under the ANDTHEEND thread, post #207.

I gave you a 5 vote for your effort.

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