All Comments on 'A Weekend Away Pt. 01'

It would be better written from the Master or subs perspective, great story line .

Interesting story line, they shifting perspective makes it difficult to read though, sort of clumsy. It’s hard to tell if this relationship is new to both of them? The castle scenario is a familiar one but a bit contradictory, dominants don’t like being told when to or how to dress their subs, then that’s followed up by somebody else putting a collar on her she denoting (thankfully!) “hands off”situation to others.

He seems exceptionally sadistic by the description of the dinner scenario, he’s planning to inflict a vast amount of pain and restrict her food intake? Contrary to popular fiction subs cannot live on a diet of semen. The story needs more details to confirm that either this is their normal and they’re both happy with it or they’re both on a learning curve. There’s a huge amount of potential in this concept.

Thanks for sharing. Tess (uk)