All Comments on 'A White Tiger and The Wolf Ch. 12'

I am a little disappointed by this chapter, it just wasn't as good as your last few were. In general, the editing just wasn't as good. The flow was awkward in some places, especially in the sex scene and there were many misused words. The story line is interesting and entertaining, so please don't give it up, just clean it up.="=

I want to know more about Connies family!

I'm hooked more please

it is a good chapter but i think you need to find someone to proof-read your work and help you get the story to flow, plus some words were mixed up.

i do understand that english might not be your first language and that might be the reason, but you should get editor to help you with this.

Donna

another cliffhanger.... great... can't wait until the next installment in this story. hurry up and write need to know all about Connie's family and why Lazio kidnapped her family members

I hope you post again soon. I have been following this from the beginning and can not wait for next chapter

I am really enjoying this story, I hope the next post doesn't take so long.

everything is starting to unfold even more now! curious as to how it all will tie in together

I can't wait for the next chapter! Please hurry!

just wanted to let you know that i love the story so far. Please dont make us wait too long for the next chapter.

Shame On you cutting the Chapter there, You could have at Lest Let brother and Sister get back together.

I like short of the cut off.

I like your stories and plots,but you need to get an editor,or use spell check....example,,.start faze(phase) two of your plan sir,,here,,should have been hear,,,and other errors,but for the story,i guess i can overlook a few mistakes,all else is great,,just need to get the next chapter done,lol,,,thanks...

Chapter 13 is been written now with any luck it should be on line very soon. I have an editor so hopefully things will flow a little better now.

I'm hoping to get the chapter finished before next week as I have to have another spell in the hospital.

Take care and thanks for your continued support of my story.

From Kay bearmad1963

so, where is chapter 13, Beardmad1963??? You have left us all dangling here and I'm "jonesing" for my next Kay/Bradley chapter. Please post it ASAP!! Thank you!!!

I am enjoying this story very much...please keep it going want to hear all about the different people and what happens to them.....keep up the good work

october 2nd and no chapter... is there any chance of it being posted soon?

nvm ignore that.... lack of sleep talking

I have been told by a few of my readers that my work is been copied and used in other stories.

I have now transferred all of my story to wattpad. I'm sick of people copying my story and using it.

My watt pad name is bearmad50 this is the link for you.

https://www.wattpad.com/user/bearmad50

I have posted chapters 1 - 14 on that sight. Please come and check it out. I will no longer be posing this story here. Bye thanks for all your support over the years. From Kay.

My new wattpad name is bearmad50kayclarke. Come and join me.