by Br0kenD0ll
yeah, the writer lately is giving short chapters, but still can tell so much about the characters with less. and at least david caught the letter, I don't know how the story would go on if the parents got it without him going to jail. but sarah had good intentions, david should show mercy/care for her.
Loving the story so far, would love longer chapters even if that meant waiting longer.
Loving the turn towards breeding, the ultimate power a man has over a woman. Would love to see Sarah embrace the instinct to procreate and give her owner what he wants. Maybe he'll take to breeding her when and as often as he wants and it brings them closer together.
Like the shirt chapter format as well, gets straight to the point and avoids unnecessary clutter.
This is so twisted. I just want to find out what happens next. Its clear now that he wants he to be connected to him. Please ignore critics, its a free website, one can easily stop reading and move elsewhere.