All Comments on 'Affairs to Remember Pt. 04'

pg.2 para.1: "तरी पण," translates to "Even then." and not "Still mother."

Glad to see an update. I do think your stories are better from the male perspective, but that’s just me.

You're my favorite author on literotica but i agree with anonymous that your stories are much better from the male perspective. Not much happened in this chapter and Kishore bhai didn't even make an appearance. I really wish you would continue the Priyamani series. That's your highest rated series for good reason. The Village setting is perfect and Deeksha joining Priyamani as the Zamindars mistress would be the perfect story

Thanks for the faster update... Make it more erotic next part. This part don't have it.

What the fuck in this story man. It's like reading a fucking encyclopaedia. For 4-6 pages there is no fucking sex. Have you lost your touch old man, what is this rubbish. The bitch in the story is talking to and fucking everyone other than the cuck and the bull.

I agree with other comments here that this chapter has too much rubbish, but I disagree that writing from Mayuri's perspective is wrong. Mayuri would definitely have first hand knowledge her affairs than would have shared with Sanjay. It would be ideal if story is written from both perspectives as they experienced or observed.

Only request to the author is to complete the story you start.

Thank you for the feedback. As explained, earlier, we decided to use Mayuri's perspective as there were several aspects that were completely hidden from me. In fact, this was a very important chapter in her journey; even if it doesn't have all the necessary sexual elements, it was an important milestone in her journey. When a woman decides to embark on such a journey there is always a story, usually it is a series of stories and that's what we see in this chapter. There is a difference between a woman and man's perspective due to which you notice differences in the style as well. More chapters are underway; hopefully we are able to publish them later this year.

Please consider posting every 2 months or less. But post as soon as possible... I love erotic stories.

I agree that this part is different when it comes to erotic scenes. But we should give writer his freedom. He is an excellent writer, let him do his own way. There's only one humble request from me. Do try to post stories as soon as possible. And please consider posting some parts of other stories as well. Are you planning to start a new series? Then I have some suggestions.