All Comments on 'After the Party'

I have just found your work and have read all your stories.

Have to say that it is surprising that your couple and all the main characters go from loving innocence to bawdy sex so quickly.

Even then the sex is all very ‘vanilla’.

You write very well my comments are intended as constructive criticism.

For example the award ceremony story leaves many unanswered questions and is it really likely that ot could have been set up as you describe. The dinner table had seven other people there, no one spoke to them? Sorry, most unlikely that they did not have full sex with her.

Not sure if your stories have any basis in reality.

My stories are all based on truth with exaggeration at the end.

Please keep writing, I have certainly added you to my list of ‘favourites’.