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by Alisonwonder

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MyEmbryoMyEmbryo5 months ago

Well written and crafted Alison

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Again, it is spoilt by bad spelling and bad grammar! Now you may think it a petty complaint! However, it does not matter what a written story is about, if as you do, make continuous spelling and grammar mistakes, it really does take the edge off the story. The subject matter and story line generally, was good. Now you can and should continue this story line, because you can do and go to all sorts of places with their married adventures! All you have to do, is use your imagination!

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I’m a 21 year old girl, recently came out of strict religion, and purity culture. I was in a lesbian relationship for about 6 months, and did a lot of sexual exploration, but still haven't had sex with a guy, not sure I want to. I’m on here to explore more darker and difficult...