All Comments on 'An Alien Entanglement Pt. 03'

Very good work, buddy

Remember to mark your chapters as "Ch. 3" or "Ch. 4". If you mark it as Pt 3, or Pt 4, it doesn't register as a series.

A Satisfying conclusion to An Alien Entanglement Part 3

Although it wasn't the HEA ending, I was expecting, nor did Ashe become a complete mind slave either.

Considering Glux used Gemini master heist for his own ends for Ashe was exceptionally, compelling tight rope, ride whether or not he was get caught in own machinations by Gemini or Coalition company was an excellent build up for his own ambitious breeding plans for Ashe in the sewers and cost of her Team. Even though Glux Jr was cute addition and another potential sibling on the way?

As they say ignorance is Bliss in Glux & Ashe case?

Catch ya later.

Cheers

P.S. Unless another new Alien Entanglement adventure happens with new characters ?

Really? Will get to that, thanks for the tip!

That read was stellar AF. Keep hammering out more chapters for sure. Will the offspring breed Ashe too, or will she recruit some fresh human females for them to have fun with in their own underground lair.

Superb

As much as I like this story I’m disappointed Ashe, being a savvy bounty hunter, could not suss out what was happening to her, nor realize the danger that it presented. I’m also disappointed the ending of the story ends with Ashe and Glux staying underground forever fucking & sucking. What about the stolen data? Should there not be some redemption for Ashe? An ending where she chooses her outcome instead of being addicted to Glux’ pheromones/cock drugs. An ending where she discovers Glux’ treachery.

Oh, this isn't the ending of this story. I more chapters planned and a some spin-off series based on this world.

Looking forward to Ashe & Gulx's next adventure and the reckoning aftermath that follows Glux's treachery reveal. of Ashe's death of the team and redemption for Ashe on the stolen data with Ashe really deciding the outcome this time.

Along with a possible new Alien Entanglement occurring or not?

What was childbirth like? Easy, hard? Why did Ashe need to recover? Was it dangerous or anxiety-inducing giving birth to an alien whose biology may not be compatible with human birthing? The kid has 4 arms, that's a lot of shoulders to get caught. There was an opportunity here to show how far Ashe is enthralled through chemical or other means.

this is weirdly hot

i love your writing style

its good ending for ugly bastard fetish yes

written by children for children.

Alien sex after sex after sex after sex after more sex followed by more sex... oh. Here's a little bit of a story plot but let's get back to the sex...

Well, the supposed story plot seemed like it was ok, just not enough of it.