All Comments on 'An Island Vacation Pt. 04'

An Island Vacation is a wonderful, if somewhat flawed story, flawed because it lacks character development- or even character information. The love scene in this chapter is excellent, and moves the story along very well, but more attention to the characters themselves would bring more interest and greater depth to the story. Like the story as a whole, this chapter is better classified as Romance rather than Erotic Couplings, because of how the erotic element is handled by the author.