All Comments on 'An Unusual Beginning Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Chapters are way to short, especially when they come once a month. It makes it choppy. However it's a great storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story, I understand why the chapters are short, taking one's time and writing quality stories is important. I cannot wait to buy this novel, Thank you Bain

MelletoniaMelletoniaover 1 year ago

Happy to see the interaction with David and Arlene!! Shorter chapter than the others but you are building the story out. I’m all in!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love this story

6King6King2 months ago

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