by mspat
Chapters are way to short, especially when they come once a month. It makes it choppy. However it's a great storyline.
Excellent story, I understand why the chapters are short, taking one's time and writing quality stories is important. I cannot wait to buy this novel, Thank you Bain
Happy to see the interaction with David and Arlene!! Shorter chapter than the others but you are building the story out. Iβm all in!