All Comments on 'An Unusual Gift Ch. 20'

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GreatwanniGreatwanni7 months ago

Each chapter is hotter than the previous! Very well done!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I would live to see Ava be commanded to think she was Jack

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Nice story. I keep checking if there's a new chapter. There are a couple of moments in this chapter where you write 'Ava' when it should've been 'Moon'. A bit confusing, but quickly corrected.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I liked the forced chastity in this chapter. I hope there will be more of this.

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