All Comments on 'Another Weekend with Shae Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
outstanding!

This is really the eighth chapter of the Total Hedonism series, and it is one of the best. As the plot unfolds, the complexity of the relationships involved takes on a new depth, and the result is a gripping drama, brilliantly written by the author. The romantic atmosphere of the story as it develops is truly heartwarming. This is outstanding storytelling all the way. Five stars.

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I'm writing and publishing under a pen name; I'm an English professor; I write mostly fantasy these days, and some smut; I've published poetry, short fiction, essays, and articles under my given name; I currently have my first fantasy novel available on Patreon (see link); I'm...