All Comments on 'Aprils set up and blackmail'

Really enjoyed this can’t wait for more

The lack of dialogue and questions and resistance, even if verbally, completely detaches any erotic dark drama for this story. And the "instant enjoyment" story syndrome doesn't help, either, but by all means, please continue. Dialogue and plausibility are needed.Thanks.

Needs some work and was pretty short, but I’m a sucker for blackmail. 4 stars

Thank you for the feed back! I uploaded the next one and tired to add more too it add more descriptions and dialoged. I'm new to writing and hopefully will get better over time. I'm also a sucker for blackmail stories

Excellent. Looking forward to "the next part" to see where this goes.

This is fucking hot. Can’t wait to see more.

Very good