All Comments on 'Attic Bound Ch. 02 - Back to the Attic'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise again.

But again, too automatic.

And you need an editor/proofreader. You wrote: ""Relax and breath," Scott said." You meant BREATHE.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved it, the build up and the release. Hope there will be more of this adventurous couple and their time(s) in the attic.

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