All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Wish For Pt. 03'

by SubmissiveCeleste

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CybersleuthCybersleuthabout 2 years ago

I still enjoy your writing even if I don't care for the subject matter.

SubmissiveCelesteSubmissiveCelesteabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you Sir. Still on the journey. ❤️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very Good, except for the Sir instead of Master. Also, no insight on what Celeste was thinking when she was trying to desperately please him (or at lease more). Thanks!

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Retired educator, loves reading and writing. I like all kinds of fiction and fantasy. New to the erotica bdsm scene. Have fantasied about being a submissive for most of my adult life.