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Click hereUncle Paul, as the kids knew him was also around a lot. He loved playing with the boys and he and Mary would often be around for dinner on weekends.
Two years later, Becky gave birth to a little girl. This one was definitely Barry's. Paul and Becky were still having sex but the timing was in Barry's favor this time.
Mary and Paul married the following year and Becky thought that would be the end of her sexual relationship with Paul. Much to her surprise both Mary and Paul wanted to continue playing and the two couples spent plenty of time in bed together. Of course, if anyone was to be left out of the fun, it would always be Barry.
The boys grew up to be strong alpha men, leaving little question in Barry's mind as to who their real father was. Becky made sure that their little sister knew how to handle the men in her life.
None of the kids were ever grounded.
- COMMENTS
Emmalee_Strict5 months agoLoved this series. I wanted to read the whole thing before commenting, so forgive me if this rambles.
First of all, your writing is informal & playful, which expresses Becky wonderfully. When she turned that quality to dominating her man, it was fun watching her change, over the chapters, become more & more sure of herself.
Change, as in character growth, is the heart of storytelling; in B's case, nicely portrayed.
But so is *conflict. So.it occurred to me to be a little bothered that Barry became a bit of a doormat, whined a little, but went along with each new rung on the submission ladder (as in, no conflict)...BUT, watching Becky grow into her dominance, which was *hot, as were the sex scenes, made me put that aside.
Still, for that reason, I have to admit I enjoyed Ch 1 the best. Barry's surprise along with Becky's sort of uncertain grasp of her control at first, that was the hottest thing.
Also, the way she took his penis-centric porn-influenced expectations and bent them to HER will! That was the best.
(Also, I'm a fan of panty-gagging, so there's was that 😈)
I'm going to read more, TW. Thanks for the ride.
Girl power, sister! Girls rule.
Cheers, Emm
LeoLewinsky6 months agoThe Epilog didnt save it and to involve kids is simply disgusting. Shame on Becky, she is an evil charakter that can not be trusted.
Frankdrudge29 months agoThe interplay with Mary joining Becky is the punishment in this chapter is intoxicating. And the total submission of Barry, a beautiful end to a love story from a different point of view.
TheCaptain000about 1 year agoI loved this story right up to the fabulous ending. It is a well written story by a great writer. Kudos to Toastywarm01. All of her works are worth reading. I hope she continues to write her stories here.
Anonymousover 1 year agoThe whole Becky series are superbly written,full of erotic tension,the punishment sequence,prison rations and lock up,especially so.I would have Barry dressed as a serving and kitchen maid,on weekends ,not wearing fetish dress,but humiliated in maids dress apron and cap.
,Great writing.
Nancy LaBonne
Qwer12over 1 year agoLooking forward to the fun Becky is hopefully about to have at his expense. I hope she rocks his world and takes him WAY PASS his limits. Rock it on. Thanks for your time to write these stories. Cheers
lamb2001over 1 year agoWonderful story. Becky is so deliciously cruel. She rules Barry in every way possible!
Anonymousover 1 year agoI love this story. Thanks so much for sharing it. It tickles a number of my fetishes. :) I haven't read Chapters 1-3, but I'll be doing so shortly. Well done! <3
