by erialfor
Interesting story of a girl coming of age and the challenges it brings. She is learning a lot quickly. Looking forward to the next chapter. So bring it on and let’s see what a waits this girl as she grows up. Cheers
Thank you Qwer and I will definitely continue this series. More to cum!
The Steven incident was an unfortunate turn but does make for an interesting change in Keith and Lucy’s relationship.
Very ominous ending to the chapter which has me nervous wondering what the self loathing part means, please tell me it has nothing to do with the blackmail or whatever it is Steven has over him.
Either way, excited to see what you have in store for us next, can’t wait.
With only two comments and much less votes I'm not sure if anyone's still interested in these characters? Anyway, I have started writing something else and will upload that first, so please don't check every day it could be a long wait. I just need a break from this series for now.
This story is hot as fuck just can’t quite understand why it always has to devolve to multiple partners. Maybe it’s a turn on for you for your missus to get banged by another guy but we don’t all swing that way, amazing story up to this point, but yeah though this was amazing up to this
Excited to see what happens next, left us on a bit of a cliffhanger.
Will Melissa make a reappearance? Maybe Keith can use her to make Lucy jealous to get even?
Please keep going with this, have been checking in on this periodically
i also didnt like the multiple partners. i find it more erotic/morbid if she truly willingly submits to keith, falls in love with him, begs to be fucked and bred.
Please continue. This is the best series I ever read on literotica. You are a very talented Writter. I love the way you capture the emotional complications of Lucy.
Please please continue. Would love for Steven to black mail Keith into sharing and dp Lucy
Please continue this beautiful story. One of the best story you wrote so far.
Even with the spiteful wife, I can feel the intensity of you writing the developing relationship between Lucy and Steven. Hopefully Steven’s “one night stand” as his wife called it makes him the alpha and knocks Lucy up. That will put a spin in this story line. Keep up the good work