All Comments on 'Behind Closed Doors Ch. 06'

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Qwer12Qwer12over 1 year ago
An Adventure Of Growing Up

Interesting story of a girl coming of age and the challenges it brings. She is learning a lot quickly. Looking forward to the next chapter. So bring it on and let’s see what a waits this girl as she grows up. Cheers

erialforerialforover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you Qwer and I will definitely continue this series. More to cum!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Checking everyday for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The Steven incident was an unfortunate turn but does make for an interesting change in Keith and Lucy’s relationship.

Very ominous ending to the chapter which has me nervous wondering what the self loathing part means, please tell me it has nothing to do with the blackmail or whatever it is Steven has over him.

Either way, excited to see what you have in store for us next, can’t wait.

erialforerialforover 1 year agoAuthor

With only two comments and much less votes I'm not sure if anyone's still interested in these characters? Anyway, I have started writing something else and will upload that first, so please don't check every day it could be a long wait. I just need a break from this series for now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story is hot as fuck just can’t quite understand why it always has to devolve to multiple partners. Maybe it’s a turn on for you for your missus to get banged by another guy but we don’t all swing that way, amazing story up to this point, but yeah though this was amazing up to this

Helena02Helena02over 1 year ago

Excited to see what happens next, left us on a bit of a cliffhanger.

Will Melissa make a reappearance? Maybe Keith can use her to make Lucy jealous to get even?

Please keep going with this, have been checking in on this periodically

Needingnow2023Needingnow2023over 1 year ago

Dont stop now keep the story going

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

agreed please continue this series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i also didnt like the multiple partners. i find it more erotic/morbid if she truly willingly submits to keith, falls in love with him, begs to be fucked and bred.

AzuraDelacroixAzuraDelacroixover 1 year ago

good read, here is hoping lucy got pregnant with keith

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

well fuck, lets hope this is not going to be a cuckold story of keith

UncleBullyUncleBullyover 1 year ago

Great Work, keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue. This is the best series I ever read on literotica. You are a very talented Writter. I love the way you capture the emotional complications of Lucy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please please continue. Would love for Steven to black mail Keith into sharing and dp Lucy

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue this beautiful story. One of the best story you wrote so far.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Even with the spiteful wife, I can feel the intensity of you writing the developing relationship between Lucy and Steven. Hopefully Steven’s “one night stand” as his wife called it makes him the alpha and knocks Lucy up. That will put a spin in this story line. Keep up the good work

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I prefer to write in detail and create a (lot of) build up. Here to see if anyone likes my stories. I hope that you enjoy reading my stories as much as I have enjoyed writing them. I'd love to hear from you! (sorry, not here for rp.)

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