All Comments on 'Believer Ch. 03'

Damn... Didn't see that coming...

Looks like someone is coming after Carole's daughter again, what with the death of her mother.

This story is now getting interesting. Jack has brought news that is sure to stir the pot even more. No murders until the end is very good to keep your readers in line and provide the rest of the fans the incentive to work on figuring out the outcome of this story. Good luck in your handling of Cindy and the DOJ.

Cindy must not be able to imagine the absolute hate that citizens of Louisiana feel for, especially, Nick Saban, and entire program at that Covid ridden University.

Yes, interested in the roft between Don and Cindy. I made a comment on a post the otherday where a person was talking of current events. Mainly the riots and the people involved with them. The poster came at me with guns blazing about racism will never be solved with my type of thinking and my news sources were all wrong. Long story short. I apoligized for my ignorance and the poster then described their feeling to the exact same thing I was trying to get across. People are so caught up with whats on bubbling on the surface they dont think about whays causing the bubbles

The next chapter of this story has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.

Did Betty tell those who killed her about the child? Or did she die with the secret still with her?

Cindy must have to many 'those times of the month' issues to do what she keeps doing or is it she has her mind on taking over her fathers empire now she has her degree.

Those DOJ clowns sure know how to stir up trouble for themselves, just like seeing the so called real higher authority beings that every country has living amongst us.

I just wish that the bad guys at the radio station get a wet stalking them and knock them off one at a time,. then those remaining would spend their time watching over their shoulder and hoping they are not the next until they are. They have had to much of a good run like in real world times the end is close for the 'Fake News' people.

Really excellent post a double cheeseburger plus on this and like so many before just can't wait for the next post.

Well done WW Iceman

The stories are fun bot the hate-on for the press and politicians is getting really old. This world we live in is indeed fucked up at times, but not as much and not in the ways the Iron Crowbar's facing. Ignorance and stupidity are more to blame than conspiracy, on both sides of American politics, among the press and in police departments across the nation.

But what's the point in criticizing stories i didn't pay for. i'll keep reading them as long as they remain entertaining.

While some may not see how accurate the real world is to this story, I certainly see very accurate similarities. Love the stories. I have personally seen outright lies from media from things I have been involved with.

remember the TET offensive and Pearl Harbor,,live, learn but don't fall asleep. TK U MLJ LV NV

It appears we are of the same mind. Seems like you have a deep dislike of the falcons, and I agree there...lol

Now that I wasn't expecting - Betty Morelli dead in the prison. Got to be the hand of thd swamp frogs reaching out again.

*****Thanks for sharing.