All Comments on 'Ben & the Enlarging Ch. 04'

I have loved everything about this story. You seem to have put quite a bit of thought into this and it really shows. Your characters are interesting and realistic as one can be in a fictional story like this. I got a laugh when I thought what would have happened if for some reason nobody got a chance to tell him the rules and he just made a town full of shapely women who wanted him sexually at all hours of the day and night. It’s a great premise you have and you have it playing out incredibly well. I cannot wait to read your chapters.

J.D.

Thanks J.D. always appreciate when someone offers feedback on my writing, and at one point I did consider a slapstick tale of a town filled with women with huge breasts, but I’m trying to keep it grounded in a sense with the rules I’ve established so far. Lots more fun to be had for sure, and hope to have the next chapter out in a couple of weeks.