All Comments on 'Betsy - Reawakened Ch. 04'

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maddoggonzo almost 5 years ago

Red lined

What about that then, a real solid introduction to the relationships in Neil's parents life, we knew Paula was sult but the infill of the sorority sisters punishment really brings it to life. The addition of Betsys trials after a fight with Darren adds so much more than I could hope for.

Keep up the wonderful work.

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Updated 12/27/23: Hello again readers. As I stated in the previous update, writing has resumed, along with some editing. I'm currently writing chapter 30 of Betsy. Once I get done with that this week, I need to write at least two chapters of Ann that I've charted so as not los...

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