All Comments on 'Broken Ribs and Home Care'

by DickBogart1953

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A beginning outline (only just) of a story that might have been written, but wasn't.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 2 years ago

The thing that would be best to making this story perfect is to take it down and pretend it never got typed.

You have no writing skill. None. My dog writes better than you do, and he's a German Shepard, not even English.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 2 years ago

I read you bio, and found you admit you lack the basic tools of writing, so you know you dick at it. Yet here I am, suffering the consequences of you doing what you know you can't. Terrorist.

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Old male retired and I like to write more if you ask! My spelling and grammar were never very good starting out riding on a short bus in school I feel I have done ok, . Hell D+ student in English.

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