All Comments on 'Brother's Orders Ch. 03'

Great Story, looking forward to the next part

That was incredibly hot. The buildup and sexual tension, the admitting she knew who it was, the description of the act itself... 5 star worthy, for sure.

Didn't like it. The tension, the build up. It was good, but people confuse noncon with degradation too often. The blackmail takes it even further in the wrong direction. If both the blackmail and the verbal abuse were removed, the story would be head and shoulders better. A better writer would be able to keep the tension high without falling into the trap of degrading the female lead.