All Comments on 'Can't Say No Ch. 06'

Fantastic chapter great to see a story focus so much on the psychological side of a scenario like this the pressure and manipulation and maneuvering that comes of it

Can't wait to read more. I'd love to see more of Jessie and her neighbour in particular.

Looks like jessie is surrounded by wolves at least of which is in sheep's clothing will Jessie soon be acting as a "shield" for Evelyn as well

Maybe an idea would be for Evelyn to give Jessie an contraceptive implant without her knowledge then have her fucking every ugly guy in the school (community service) in order to earn her morning after pills (tic tacs) and money to pay for them :) Then finding out after fucking all them she never could get pregnant

Kinda hope take it on different angle.

The author is clearly a very talented writer, on so many levels. Very under-rated. The question now is whether the focus stays just on Jessie and Evelyn or broadens to include Caroline, Lily, etc. That will determine just how excellent a writer, and the scope of the writer, we are witnessing. I doubt very much we will be disappointed.

Loving your take on this genre particularly how the story is focused on the female characters rather than the male ones

Bring on chapter 7

Just powered though all six chapters.

Loved it and looking forward to more.

Ignore the haters and morons in some of the other comments who don’t even know what category they’re reading.

Hope this means you're back! love your story!!

Would love to see Jessie interacting with someone in the same position as her like Caroline or Lily how she would react to seeing them getting pregnant realizing that she is probably next

Keep up the great work

Poor Jessie day by day getting ground down the way her Mom has been would love to see jess find out about the ovulation cycle and what her most fertile days are (her mom doesn't seem to have taught her much of anything) would add to the pressure she is under

Perhaps the ever "helpful" Evelyn could work it out for her and then maybe sell that information to anyone looking to plant their seed at the right time or maybe Stephenson would like to make sure no one else has that opportunity

So in this world, the less attractive you are the more room you have to maneuver with

I would love to see Evelyn engineer an encounter as payback to one of the girls who has wronged her by selling that girls location and knowing it was the wrong time of the month for her be cummed in

I love this story especially Jessie and her neighbour. The filth they offer is God-tier.

I seriously felt my heart skip a beat, I thought she was gonna say the pill she gave Jessie was a FERTILITY BOOSTER... (And am I an evil person if I'm sad that it wasn't?)

Lucky Mr. Stephenson looks like he is going to "Ruin her tight body" soon enough are you going to follow through with Jessie's pregnancy or end the series once she is knocked up

Five out five you're a great writer

I loved it. My eyes were glued to every page.

Can't wait to see Jess get pregnant would be nice to see Evelyn get knocked up to who knows who many pregnancies her actions have indirectly led too

Enjoyed the story so far can I'm excited for the next installment

Nice Twist with Evelyn please write a sex scene with her in it maybe with a boy who understands what she is and enjoys having her just for the power

Completely agree with all the people who have praised your work. Especially Love how you’ve captured the psychological aspect .

How about delving into the intricacies of breeding a new generation. Is it simply a matter of chance and the unfortunate mother has to raise the child? Or is there a, “Law” about who is allowed to keep their children?

Also the idea of forced lesbianism as entertainment for the men might be an idea

Keep up the great work

Erotica at it's beautiful best...Thank you for sharing ForlornUnicorn

Evelyn turns out to be not what she seems Jessie doesn't seem to have any real friends or support to rely on at all.

I might be completely misreading this but is Evelyn a lesbian or Bi but perhaps unaware of it?

Damn I didn't see that one coming although it makes perfect sense when I think about it.

Man Jessie really is screwed I guess the "normal" ending for a story like this is the girls wins/gets away/gets revenge but that's feeling increasingly unlikely as I read further into this story and to be honestly I like it dark ending FTW.

Damn what the hell Evelyn you doing Jessie like that. I would really like to see Evelyn get fucked by one of the guys even better if Jessie knowingly or unknowingly enables it.

Your characterization of Evelyn is fantastic a entirely believably product of someone who was bullied in the old hierarchy and suddenly finds power when things change.

Would be ironic if Evelyn manipulating people is ultimately responsible for Jessie getting knocked up.

I would have loved to see the sex scene between Lily Peterson and the guy as well would have been great to write it alongside Evelyn's fake act with Jessie to show just how brutally focused she is her own future.