All Comments on 'Carmilla's Prey'

Liked the reality you brought to this short vampire piece coupled with the humor/playfulness of Camilla, but the brevity detracted; a bit rushed. Leaving aside how Lucy connected with Camilla (not necessary for this scene but would be fun to experience), the fear, playfulness and sex are under developed. That said, I hope you share more of Lucy and Camilla or wherever your imagination takes you. You write well; glad you like to do so.