All Comments on 'Catering for a Stag Do. Ch. 13'

Can't Dave and Trish's just have a bad accident and stop this mess already? No? Okay, this just highlights the dumbassery of the person who wrote this crap show. Dave as a human being is a deviate ass. Trish is a wanton slut. Neither have a shred of self worth or moral fiber.

This is the last chapter? Well thank god!

I don’t care what arrangements they made or who arranged their marriage, treating her husband like that would piss him off and divorce would absolutely be on the table. After all, if against a the church to divorce, it sure as shit stinks would be against church doctrine to commit adultery.

Fucking wanker.

very interesting tale KEEP IT COMMING

I'm curious to see how you have Dave&Trish getting back home and resuming their normal life again. Cant see Trish settling down after all they have been doing.

VERY exciting, didn't know what was "coming" next; it was all fantastic!!!

Screw all the asses here talking smack. This is your story, you wrote it. No one elses opinions matter. If you're happy then thats all that matters.

Just can’t understand those who continue to read your great stories so as to slag you off. I find them erotically brilliant. Next please!

If life could only be so good. Thanks for your writing.

Next chapter please ...

Yes please, another chapter and maybe a spin off?

More please

What agent story!! I’m normally not one to write a review but this was great and one more chapter would be assume.

Agree with all the positive comments, well written.

I'm sure Dave and Trish will continue exploring her wild side.

Loved it.

Anna

A great story. One of the best I have read here. You are to be commended on your imagination and your extremely skilled wordcraft. Please continue the series, I am sure your fertile imagination is far from exhausted. For example, Trish's explorations into the same-sex love & lust remain to be exploited. Best wishes.

Excellent writing! Can you have Dave allow Trish to give Alain head?

A total of 15 comments, displayed. And all positive. About a promiscuous whore wife. Totally believable.

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What a dumb shit.

This is the first of your stories I have read, I absolutely loved it, it’s in the top 5 of stories I’ve read here. I’m looking forward to reading more of your stories and also another chapter of this one. You are only the second Kiwi author on this site that I’m aware of, his stories are up there too.

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